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Halloween Night

Rosabella met her maker on Halloween night It was an unnatural death . . . Death met her in the maple forest On the edge of town She lay in the brittle leaves Her eyes starring in horror It was a violent death . . . A dark veil of hair fell across an open eye The stars twinkled down on Rosabella She looked perfectly beautiful Except she was dead . . . Such a small wound to drain all her blood A mere mark on her white throat She was a fool . . . To go walking on Halloween night What could have lured her to the forest With every form of ghost, goblin, devil and vampire lurking about . . . They took her to the town morgue Draped her body with a virgin white sheet, so white And there she lay waiting Until . . . . ______________________________ Written, 2012 Free Verse Submitted to the contest, Halloween Only, Skat

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  1. Date: 11/10/2013 12:56:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Constance

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:43:00 PM
    oh YES, it looks to be a vampire poem!! I love this, Constance. worthy of a high place in my estimation.

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:20:00 PM
    Broken, Congratulations on your awesome Halloween win. Love ~ SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on your Halloween Night contest win Constance. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 5:27:00 AM
    This is more than scary. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 9:08:00 PM
    CONSTANCE, congratulations in Gail's spectacular and eerie "Halloween Night " contest. Much enjoyed stopping by to read and devote myself to the soup.. :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 9:32:00 AM
    The suspense ....! I enjoyed reading your entry in the Halloween Night contest. Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 2:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your smashing scary win Constance xx

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:21:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:00:00 AM
    what a vivid interplay of impressions, constance.. wior sure!... SOUP MAIL URGENT!..;) huggs!

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud
    Date: 8/27/2012 7:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    * winner* for sure
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:55:00 PM
    scary and spooky with vivid imagery to enthrall the reader Constance .. best wishes .. yes I feel your pain as well in my thoughts each day and night..u r first in our prayers always..I have been bed bound also since pin removed from neck last week.. hands swollen and ache constantly. trying to be ME again. hope u have loved ones nearby to visit. they keep me going

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:28:00 PM
    Ah, yes, until...I love that! You did masterfully with this incredible write! I love this poem, as I do most of the Halloween spectacles that are out there! Halloween is my favorite time of the year, I'm a huge fan of it and everything that happens on this glorious night! You have delighted me to the fullest with this very enjoyable write my friend! Thank you for doing so! Great Work!!