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Halloween Moon

On frost chilled night twinkling stars wink through misty shrouds as miniature monsters in drunken sugar trances carouse the twilight. Good pious folk stay hidden with candy alms against the fright, while the swollen Halloween moon whimsically grins down at such a sight. 10/08/15

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/22/2015 8:48:00 PM

Congrats on your win. A7

James Inman
Date: 10/23/2015 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Robert.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/22/2015 12:47:00 AM

Oh you did this so well James. Big Congrats on your win!#7

James Inman
Date: 10/23/2015 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for the nice comment Connie.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/21/2015 3:30:00 PM

Hi James, you managed to put such a lot in just four lines! Love the imagery. Congrats on a most worthy win. // paul

Neva Romaine

Date: 10/21/2015 2:37:00 PM

Hey James, a hearty congratulations on your win in the contest! Great imagery and excellent storytelling. Be Blessed, Neva

James Inman
Date: 10/21/2015 2:39:00 PM

Thank You Neva.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/21/2015 11:37:00 AM

A good one, James! Congratulations on your win. Janice

James Inman
Date: 10/21/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thanks. Janice

Michael Tor

Date: 10/21/2015 3:46:00 AM

Nice James congrats on your win!!!

James Inman
Date: 10/21/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Michael.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/21/2015 12:07:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write James!

James Inman
Date: 10/21/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Sharma.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2015 10:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win!!! James,thank you so very much for entering my contest.

James Inman
Date: 10/21/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for hosting it, Eve. Really enjoyed this, and you've inspired some extremely clever and enjoyable poems.

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/20/2015 10:41:00 PM

Truly a whimsical take on the theme. Congrats on the win.

James Inman
Date: 10/21/2015 7:54:00 AM

Thanks, Dan.

John Lawless

Date: 10/20/2015 10:36:00 PM

'miniature monsters in drunken sugar trances"...best description of the little zombies ever!!!

James Inman
Date: 10/21/2015 7:52:00 AM

Sorry, John. I hate it when these comments get mixed up. The one below was meant for Viv, but thanks for the great comment and, as per my comment on your sight, I loved yours as well.