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Halloween Haiku

on halloween eve apple bobbing with grandma...... false teeth on apple smiling carved pumpkin advertisement of toothpaste...... grandma's false teeth

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2011 8:22:00 PM

Way to go, kash. I especially like the first one!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/31/2011 10:05:00 PM

Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Kash

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2011 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Halloween Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/30/2011 10:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your Halloween Haiku win Kash

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2011 7:15:00 PM

Congrats Kash on another great win with these stunning Halloween Haikus my friend..enjoy luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/30/2011 6:08:00 PM

I think I shall send this to my dentist for Halloween, Kash. The ladies in the office will also enjoy it! Congrats...u wrote a great haiku, friend. Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/30/2011 2:45:00 PM

KASH , congratulations ON YOUR VERY XOOL entry for my HALLOWEEN contest.. have yourself a wonderful Halloween,,;-) p.d.

Katherine Stella

Date: 10/30/2011 10:54:00 AM

omg Kash my mom would of lost her false teeth on this you crack me up the imagery is fantastic thanks for sharign and for stopping by with comment on my eye of the tiger had to change it alittle at end but thinks its still worked out lets hope lol keep up the wonderful writing

John Freeman

Date: 10/30/2011 6:59:00 AM

Haaaaaaaaa! Thanks for your comment Kash. Wonderful gig on the false teeth. You go girl. Agape, Moses

Margaret Okubo

Date: 10/27/2011 2:04:00 PM

Cute. Love it. Thanks for your kind comments.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/26/2011 10:22:00 AM

Hi Kash...hope all is well with u my friend..enjoying reading once again.. smiling..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/25/2011 8:28:00 PM

You had me laughing out loud, Kash. This is amazing humor and delightful imagery (grandma's false teeth). Love those last two lines. Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/25/2011 7:23:00 PM

a warm feeling, kash poet! THANKS! jimbo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/25/2011 10:30:00 AM

rrring.. this is your dentist calling.. i have new offer for teeth cloning! unbelievable humor... lol,, come ! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2011 8:47:00 AM

Cute one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..My oven is dinging saying check on food..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2011 12:00:00 AM

VERY fun and how you kept those false teeth in the scene!! I especially liked the first one. I did bobbing for apples with my students today. they didnt' really get into it and they all cheated and grabbed the apples by the stems. Or else they didn't try at all! Nice seeing you with a new one tonight! Luv, Andrea

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/24/2011 5:52:00 PM

This is magical and a belly buster too! Poor grandma better get her teeth back...I envision a first place with this one. So awesomely written! Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2011 2:16:00 PM

a great humorous haiku for Halloween Kash my friend... great visual picture haha..good luck in the contest luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/24/2011 6:12:00 AM

Ahhhhh I love the humor in this great entry... wishing you all the best in the contest my poet friend....Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2011 5:46:00 AM

I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Kash. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 10/24/2011 3:05:00 AM

hey Kash puts gran in a different light now..David

Charles Henderson

Date: 10/24/2011 2:29:00 AM

gosh Kash, remind me not to smile around you!!!!!!!!