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Halloween Costume Ball

Hairy eyeballs hanging from a wizard’s crown. Arachnids sprawled on his black sparkling gown. Ludicrous marks scar his face beneath a frown. Luscious blood dripping very slowly down. Opulent jewelry shaped like bones. Worn around his neck amid creepy groans. Ecstatic bats wait around for deadly moans. Eerily suspended from their master’s belt. Nonchalantly walking, his evil presence is felt. Coming down the stairs was a star bejeweled queen. Overcome; such beauty he had never before seen. Stunned into submission by her piercing eyes. Trapped by love’s intrusion and compassion’s cries. Unveiling beauty, cajoling pleasant sighs. Miraculously transformed his evil heart; love flows. Enticed by the moment, together, attraction grows. Bedazzled by the grandeur of the Halloween Ball Altruism curiously sealed love that fall. Laughter filled the man with the eyeballs on his crown. Loved by the queen in her star bejeweled gown. © October 15, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 11/29/2010 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Irma's "Halloween Costume Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2010 3:00:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in Irma's cool contest with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy your win with luv...
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Date: 11/26/2010 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane
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Date: 11/26/2010 1:35:00 PM
Shivers, scary costume, almost too real, congrats on the win:)
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Date: 11/26/2010 10:01:00 AM
Many congrats Dane Ann on your win in SKAT's contest >> James
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Date: 11/26/2010 6:10:00 AM
I just read the other entries that placed ahead of yours. Justice was not done! You should have placed in the top three. I'm truly sorry and chagrined that this great piece was not meritorously awarded!
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Date: 11/26/2010 6:00:00 AM
Great use of descritive adjectives. Your monster and seductress are artfully dressed!
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Date: 11/25/2010 10:20:00 PM
Dane, CONGRATULATIONA! and Sorry for judging my contest late. Once again I love the taste of my # 1-10 placements. Enjoyed the thought and smiles. Thanks so much for my contest entry, have your self a wonderful & bessed holiday~luv* SKAT
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Date: 10/25/2010 4:46:00 PM
To my skinny good cholesterol healthy lady friend!!!:) You go gal! "Trapped by love’s intrusion and compassion’s cries." great line Dane! Light & Love
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:49:00 PM
much better that i thought at first when i read the title.. love always has that effecgt on me. john
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:58:00 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Dane Ann. The best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:12:00 AM
Once again....you capture each contest, with style, and do a wonderful piece, Dane Ann!! Well done!!
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:23:00 AM
Very interesting write on Halloween Costume Ball, Dane
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