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Hallowed Ground

I remember well the small farm scene Where a man driving a tractor through the wide open Field was doing all he could, hoping The clouds might bring rain. Tomorrow would be none too soon And afterwards, he said, “We could laugh and dance As if this was the last chance To plant seeds and make romance under a bright, full moon.” I watched him get down off that big machine And sift through the ground like He were looking for gold despite The fact he was searching for something more like a dream. Deeper down into the ground I watched him scratch with hands and spade Feverishly as the sun set slow Turning himself to a golden glow Until I watched him rise up and say: “This ground is hallowed here today.” Then abruptly he turned back towards home With a smile from eyes to ears (And later I would hear) This was a land of love and tears where Indians once lived and roamed. I still remember well the small farm scene Where a man driving a tractor through the wide open Field was doing all he could, hoping He might find something besides the rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/10/2013 5:54:00 AM
an old farmer once said to me: i love the rain. i love digging the soil for other peoples problems, gluttony, starvation. i can't afford sickness; i've furrows enough worrying sheep till the rains come. then everyone benefits my digging the dirt. very well considered and penned, Terry. regards, eph.
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Date: 4/3/2013 11:14:00 AM
You're a master storyteller, my friend. I enjoyed this one top to bottom. Good piece of writing. Licia :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 1:39:00 PM
Thanks Delysia:) To be honest, I wasn't sure where the poem was headed when I started out. All I had was the first line and the desire to write this type of a quatrain which I'd never attempted before. The story seemed to unfold and reveal itself as I worked through it. I'm glad it worked out but not completely to my liking. I can do better and will of course, keep on trying!
Date: 4/3/2013 11:03:00 AM
- A nice "story" in your poem Terrell - We can find a lot of history in the soil .... far, far back in time. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 1:41:00 PM
Thank you for reading and responding Anne Lise. As I mentioned to Delysia above, it's not completely to my liking but I like the form and hope to do more of this quatrain in the future. Thanks again. Terry
Date: 4/2/2013 3:14:00 PM
This is a very nicely written poem. You followed the form well. You told a very beautiful story. You kept my attention, which is hard to do. great write. keep writing!
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Date: 4/3/2013 1:43:00 PM
You were the first to read and respond to this poem Marvin and it sincerely means a lot to me that you did so. I owe you a visit and will most certainly return the reading favor in the very near future. Thank you again dear friend, Terry

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