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Haiku You

Love makes flowers bloom,
neglect leaves them weak to die.
Bees fly away mad!

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  1. Date: 10/13/2012 3:11:00 PM
    this is really cute!

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 2:24:00 PM
    Everything needs love. - Well done haiku Vicki. - Wishing you a lovely weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Nicely done Vicki! Without tender care flowers have the tendecy to wilt. I love the way you've tied the consequence of neglect to the bees - it reminds us that actions have consequences. Nice!