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Haiku One

radiating sun across clear tranquil blue skies tree buds' petals warmth hopping frogs capture the first of blood sucking louse plums dropwart blossoms lips grin at the sound from a rumbling waterfall raw freshness afloats skirting the valley sprawls a field of wildflowers butterflies sweet bed (C) olive eloisa 10:25 pm May 15,2014 Contest Name: Spring into haiku Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi 2nd Place, Praise GOd! :)

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2014 9:02:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 3:52:00 AM

thanks much Sir.. :D

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/16/2014 5:12:00 PM

All right! Haiku paradise ....congrats. BG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 4:08:00 AM

THank you BArbara.. :) GBU, olive

Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2014 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations once again Olive_eloi!!:) This week you have taken winning positions by storm! Lovely haiku. 1st and 4th tie this write into a pretty bunch! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 4:47:00 AM

wehew.. :) Thanks much PAul, I don't expect much :) just i try and try and try.. :) anyhow i have nothing to lose.. :) GBU sweets.. :D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/16/2014 10:56:00 AM

Unique and creative winning work..Way to go ..Congrats ..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 4:44:00 AM

Thanks SAra.. :) I appreciate you onwards marks.. :) GBU

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 5/16/2014 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on well deserved win! Lori

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Lori..:) GBU

Linda Jackson

Date: 5/16/2014 7:37:00 AM

I loved the imagery in your poem. Congratulations. Linda x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 4:45:00 AM

THAnk you Lnda.. :) GBU Im pleasured of you what had written also.. :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2014 9:10:00 PM

So cool to see you place high in a contest of Deb's. She is strict with her haiku. BIG congrats to you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/16/2014 1:08:00 AM

Thanks much Andrea.. :) I really have fun learning again.. :) and yes my former entry I changed it all .. :) and so this one.. :D a bracing time challenge as I dealt with this.. :D! but it paid off. :D

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/15/2014 5:13:00 PM

yeah Olive [haiku 1] ok hon all but the first one are GOOD [do not submit the first one it needs work], did you enter? Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 6:59:00 PM

and i replaced with another one that appeals to the feelings..(warmth) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 5:45:00 PM

hahha yes Debbie. :) i take your suggestion.. :)thanks much..:)

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/15/2014 4:43:00 PM

WOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! Real powerful verse, I must say. The way you depict this is engrossing.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 9:35:00 AM

Thanks much Ivo.. Really Ppreciate your drop by here..:)