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Haiku In Troika

Snow Queen's galloping three headed icy-cold sleigh, a troika blizzard Date : 12/15/2016 Note : For the contest (The Troika - Haiku With Hooves) by John Lawless. *Placed Fifth*

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Date: 1/17/2017 1:17:00 PM
Very well done Afzal, congratulations...
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie
Date: 1/16/2017 12:30:00 PM
Very good Haiku, Afzal, congratulations on your win
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Date: 1/16/2017 10:00:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 1/14/2017 6:14:00 PM
A grand cold visual! Congrats, Afzal!
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Date: 1/14/2017 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 1/14/2017 3:56:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Afzal
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Date: 1/14/2017 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 1/14/2017 3:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Afzal.
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Date: 1/14/2017 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Date: 1/14/2017 1:22:00 PM
WHAT A VISUAL......great job Afzal, thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 1/14/2017 10:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much for putting me in the winner's list, John.
Date: 1/10/2017 4:17:00 PM
I love the image which you have projected, Afzal; but I would not want to be caught in an icy cold blizzard!! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/10/2017 10:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul for the lovely comment and even I wouldn't want to be caught in a blizzard.
Date: 1/5/2017 12:21:00 AM
It has hooves and it moves. Looks like a winner. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Janis.
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Date: 1/5/2017 9:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janis.
Date: 1/2/2017 11:48:00 PM
A 7 for your lively three-liner, Afzal! Happy New Year. Janice
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Date: 1/3/2017 10:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice and a very 'HAPPY NEW YEAR' to you as well.
Date: 12/25/2016 11:13:00 AM
Hi Afzal, This is just beautiful! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/25/2016 9:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis for reading my poems and Happy Holidays to you & your loved ones as well.
Date: 12/20/2016 5:18:00 PM
Very nice haiku Afzal....Gl in the contest
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Date: 12/20/2016 10:33:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 12/19/2016 11:47:00 PM
Great imagery -- it engaged my senses. loved it.
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Date: 12/20/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, David.
Date: 12/18/2016 11:37:00 PM
This is wonderful,Afzal :-) good luck in the contest. Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/19/2016 12:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve and Happy Holidays to you as well.
Date: 12/18/2016 10:18:00 AM
Beautiful. Wish you best
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Date: 12/19/2016 12:47:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha
Date: 12/16/2016 9:34:00 PM
oh this is simply SPLENDID, my friend!
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Date: 12/16/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 12/16/2016 12:09:00 PM
Nice work Nafzal, thanks for your visits...
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Date: 12/16/2016 10:28:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
Date: 12/16/2016 12:36:00 AM
Sounds very fierce:) well written, Afzal:)
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Date: 12/16/2016 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Jo.

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