Haiku God Shepherd

you just can't sit there shepherds say lambs gathering that hard rock blisters

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/25/2014 10:17:00 AM

Nicely penned haiku! I really enjoyed it my dear friend Rajat. Have a very nice day! A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Michael Newman

Date: 11/25/2014 6:38:00 AM

Nicely Put Miken

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Michael. God bless. RAJAT

Eve Roper

Date: 11/24/2014 11:53:00 PM

Rajat, the hard rock does blisters those hands and feet. :) blessings to you and yours eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 9:54:00 AM

Yes Eve dear. God does not want our body blisters. So he comes in the guise of shepherds to give us protection. Love. God bless. RAJAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2014 6:04:00 PM

this is sure interesting. I can imagine them sitting there on that hard rock!!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 9:51:00 AM

Andrea darling God takes care of us always anywhere all the time. He guides us as a shepherd does.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/24/2014 1:01:00 PM

God shepherds us. How true! Rajat, He also is our good shepherd, is He not? He looks after us, His lambs. Without God's guidance we are lost. Blessings, Darlene

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 9:46:00 AM

Yes Darlene, exactly that I did want to say.Love. God bless. XXXX rajat