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a flash-flood overflows the storm drain: a paper boat races

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/29/2012 2:32:00 AM
Debbie, great image..David
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Date: 7/28/2012 7:52:00 PM
Great haiku, Debbie! Like it. Love, Kim
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Date: 7/28/2012 7:21:00 PM
Nice one, Debs. How's it going?
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Date: 7/28/2012 4:30:00 PM
This is a fabulous write Debbie! I just loved it, reminded me of my childhood at my grandparents (who lived in the city)! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/28/2012 4:13:00 PM
Very good haiku Debbie. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/28/2012 3:51:00 PM
love this one, Debs - just wanted to say we don't have a TV in the bedroom, but we have all the other no nos - no idea where else to put it all, though, lol. Great blog
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