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in peril like ants riding leaves down a storm drain... ruthless waves of fear _______________________________________________ 2//10/16 For Nate's Contest: "In The Deep" Haiku # 102

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Date: 2/19/2016 5:57:00 AM
What a great image in the second line, Carrie.
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Date: 2/18/2016 7:38:00 PM
Congrats for an awesome win, Carrie.
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:29:00 PM
Carrie,congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:32:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your excellent win, for your outstanding Haiku! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:48:00 AM
Hi Carrie. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent haiku!
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:48:00 PM
Congrats on ur top place win with this awesome haiku Carrie.
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Date: 2/16/2016 6:45:00 PM
Oooh I like this one ... it's like you took a microscope to a dramatic scene we humans aren't aware of. For me that's one of the strengths of haiku ... noticing something people don't often think about. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/16/2016 5:30:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats.Great comparisons.Sara
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Date: 2/16/2016 3:00:00 PM
fabulous interpretation of the image congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:35:00 PM
An excellent comparison, Carrie! Fear runs powerful even in just 3 lines. Congratulations on placing 2nd! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:47:00 PM
The picture sure made me afraid..Congrats! BG
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:28:00 PM
Hi, Carrie, Congratulations in Nate's "Haiku 102" contest. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/16/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Nate'
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Date: 2/11/2016 3:33:00 PM
Nice little analogy!!
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