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Haiku 8

I feel the lost knot of just being, without thought. The space of regret.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/27/2013 4:48:00 PM
one of my favorites from your list of haiku. Love the rhyme of knot and thought.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/27/2013 5:06:00 PM
For me, there's a sadness contained in the space of regret. The rhyme was an accident, I hate to admit. J
Date: 2/14/2013 9:24:00 PM
Jack , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/14/2013 9:32:00 PM
Why, thank you. It was a good day. I hope yours was too. J

Book: Shattered Sighs