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Haiku 72-Beneath the Sakura Tree

cherry blossom i lick fresh sweetness from his lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/12/2016 8:20:00 AM
Playfully teasing poem Charmaine.
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:32:00 AM
I'm sorry I haven't been here much, even more so, of not being in touch-- my dad hasn't been well for about 20 days now, and my mom also not feeling that well. been busy with family & school... Aww, sweet Christina is growing up too fast! I miss your friendship too-- how i wish I can be her teacher!! Will sleep now, sending you hugs and love, glad to know you are fine and I will catch up soon!
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:18:00 AM
This is definitely so sweet, Charma! I see you posted a bunch of haiku and I hope to read them on another day-- I really enjoyed this sweet haiku--also a bit deviating, but now I wonder what sakura blossom tea tastes like. I hope all is well with you <3!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/7/2014 11:40:00 AM
Ow gee..I am so sorry for your mom and gee your papa too now : (.I will add your papa to my prayers ..your mum is already there.I ll send you an.email one of these days dear.If you were Christina s teacher,that would be cool : ).I show your pics to her at times : ).This month you usually start preparing for halloween too.I remember the pics. Sleep well.Get tp you any other day .
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/7/2014 11:27:00 AM
Hi sweet sweet Nikko..How are you?I hope to see more of you cause darn I miss your friendship.I am fine dear.Christina started her baby club lessons every Friday.I go with her,a sort of way to prepare her for nursery next yr and kinder the following.I am fine dear.Hope you abd your family too..Hugs
Date: 10/4/2014 5:48:00 AM
Very sweet and inviting( not his lips) the poem! Ha-ha! Excellent, dear Charmaine!
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Date: 10/3/2014 9:21:00 PM
I need a fan to cool myself down. So much heat from such a little flame. This was a real treat to read.
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Date: 10/3/2014 4:28:00 PM
Yummy :) how you can say so much in so little, I like it!
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Date: 10/3/2014 4:18:00 PM
Ah so sweet. I like how you surprise me with only nine words Charmaine.
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Date: 10/3/2014 4:17:00 PM
how sweet and sensuous.....hugs Tim
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Date: 10/3/2014 3:55:00 PM
A cherry blossom Kiss! How romantic. Loved your Haiku. Darlene
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Date: 10/3/2014 3:39:00 PM
I love it Char. Great idea to do a kind of series of haikus. Love, Maurice.
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Date: 10/3/2014 3:22:00 PM
oh so clever Charmaine - I had to look up Sakura - a delicious haiku its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xxx
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