Haiku 65

Haiku 65 taut threads of pain darkness behind my eyes clouds cry (Written for a friend.)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2013 1:00:00 AM

wow, now THIS is haiku!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/14/2013 8:16:00 AM

A lot of pain though... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 10:19:00 PM

Hello Sweet, Jack, I feel like haiku tonight... and by the looks of it... you have many to enjoy.... so please do not mind the smiles I will leave behind... xox~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 10:19:00 PM

ps... a sad thought, and imagery... :-( PD

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/12/2013 11:12:00 PM

A sad friend...

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/11/2013 6:05:00 PM

Let it rain. But, the sun shall return. Great job!

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/11/2013 8:10:00 PM

Thanks for reading my haiku, Drake... Jack

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/11/2013 4:38:00 PM

pain and grief in this Jack well written Shadow x smiles

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/11/2013 4:44:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words, Shadow... Jack