Haiku 4

Seth Thomas chimes true; two tones, an exchange of mind. Light tells the season.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2013 12:36:00 PM

I think I would need to understand who Seth Thomas is to truly get this one. But anyway, I sure enjoyed the read. have a great Saturday. Luv, Andrea

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/2/2013 2:00:00 PM

Seth Thomas was an early 19th century clockmaker. I should have explained... I'm glad you liked it anyway. Jack

Donna Jones

Date: 1/31/2013 7:39:00 PM

Liked this much .....this kind of poetry is usually over my head but I mostly got this one... nice..maybe I'll catch up someday with patience.

Jack Jordan
Date: 1/31/2013 9:02:00 PM

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Jack

Ann Roske

Date: 1/31/2013 8:49:00 AM

Love this Jack - nicely penned!

Jack Jordan
Date: 1/31/2013 9:03:00 PM

Thank you. Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2013 7:20:00 AM

Well said and written in haiku poem, Jack - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 1/31/2013 9:04:00 PM

Thanks. It has been a good day. Jack