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Haiku

soft damp heather squashed hot lips and passion now spent two naked bodies © ~GG~ 12/11/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Rollo West
Date: 11/13/2012 12:05:00 PM
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Hi Mandy, this is a great write, great imagery. Rollo
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/13/2012 8:47:00 AM
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I really like this one..That is laying it all out there..I haven't checked the winners' list so don't know if to give congratulations..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/13/2012 11:42:00 AM
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no Sara not a winner I'm afraid xx
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Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 11/12/2012 9:25:00 PM
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...and passion reigns...Awesome!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/13/2012 12:05:00 AM
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Thanks Vicky xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/12/2012 3:27:00 PM
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wowowow, what a way to include nature. GREAT entry!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM
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well it has been drummed into me that haiku is nature based so why not a bit of soft warm heather xx
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Jack Horne
Date: 11/12/2012 2:02:00 PM
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I love this passionate haiku, Mandy
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM
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Thanks jack xx
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/12/2012 11:38:00 AM
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Woo HOO. Now that's a Haiku!!! Love it my poet dear friend. Hugs Michael
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/13/2012 12:06:00 AM
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Big hugs back at you Michael xx
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Harry Horsman
Date: 11/12/2012 6:32:00 AM
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wow you are on "Ilkley Moor" this is awesome Mandy,
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/12/2012 6:45:00 AM
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thanks harry I keep trying with my haiku, thanks for your tuition xx
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Kash Poet
Date: 11/12/2012 6:12:00 AM
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Wow!!!! Feeling the heat!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/12/2012 6:26:00 AM
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good, tha'ts the idea. lol. Thanks Kash xx

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