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Haiku 42 - 1,2,3

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Haiku 42 - 1,2,3

	a noiseless moment 
	he writes in his diary
	incessant snow  

	every day he hoped   
	every day she avoided…  
	waning moon

	his need for love 
	he opened his careless mouth 
	oak tree, splintered

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Deep emotion complemented by great imagery! A wonderful read, thank you.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 2:24:00 AM
    Clever write!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/27/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Susan... Jack
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Need I say more ! Wonderful set dear poet, and I truly enjoyed its lead ! Have a wonderful weekend Jack.....much love, james

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Jack, I like all three ..... but, if I should choose one ..... was my selection: 3 - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/26/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks... There are five in the series, the idea being to tell a story in haiku... Jack