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Haiku 38 - Clouds and Stones

Haiku 38 – Clouds and Stones cumulus clouds softened shapes of river stones... a shared aesthetic For Barbara Gorelick’s contest, “Clouds.”

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 9:07:00 AM

Jack, a lovely winning poem... thanks for sharing and the wonderful comment this morning... Soup mail...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 9:07:00 AM

soup mail

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 11:30:00 AM

Congrats on your great winning work..Delightful work..Sara

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/29/2013 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. I appreciate the comment... Jack

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/27/2013 7:00:00 PM

Jack Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2013 9:10:00 AM

Terrific haiku Jack !! This would have #1 in a haiku contest!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/27/2013 9:15:00 AM

Thanks, Carrie. I'm beginning to learn to save my best haiku... Jack

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/27/2013 12:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your place on the winners list Jack xx

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/27/2013 8:09:00 AM

Thank you, Mandy... jack

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2013 10:13:00 PM

Jack, I loved your poem even though it wasn't in the requested form. Its a beaut! BG

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/26/2013 10:18:00 PM

Thank you for the honor, Barbara. I replied on your blog that in the future I will give close attention to the instructions, although I'm generally know for doing otherwise... Jack

Skat A

Date: 8/26/2013 8:32:00 PM

Jack, it is an awesome win.... ~Love ~~SKAT

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/26/2013 10:01:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT. It was very much a surprise, and an honor indeed... Jack

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/15/2013 12:49:00 PM

Nice haiku, Jack...shared aesthetic...opposite texture...ha

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/15/2013 1:24:00 PM

You got it! A man with a good mental eye... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2013 9:09:00 AM

Good morning Jack, some finding imagery. dark and gloomy. enjoyed your haiku... Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/15/2013 10:12:00 AM

Good morning to you, Linda. Hmmm... I didn't think it was gloomy, although I'm glad you enjoyed it. Maybe it's just me this morning... Jack