Haiku 34

a cold day with the furnace humming-- warm cat

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Charles Henderson

Date: 2/4/2013 6:16:00 AM

ahhhh yes, those cats will lie on their nice warm pillow and hum. The cold finally arrived this week. Am not feeling any oats, I hate to work in the cold. But I have enjoyed letting the two cats sleep inside this week. Got to run. Spray painting.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/31/2013 7:13:00 AM

awesome haiku friend Debbie :)..I like cats..Good day and thanks for stopping by. Hugs, Maria

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/30/2013 10:26:00 PM

Well I see the kitty curled on a braided rug by the flickering logs of the fire and me going for marshmallows ;) love you bunches. Cap'n deb

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/30/2013 2:31:00 PM

As usual, wonderful, my dear Debbie! You are the best... hugs, Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2013 10:22:00 AM

We should be like the cat ......well written Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Margherita Russo

Date: 1/29/2013 2:21:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 1/29/2013 1:58:00 PM

This made me smile

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/29/2013 7:22:00 AM

Andie it wouldn't be wrong to say [warm cat on my lap] except that it is unnecessary, you put the cat where you as the reader wanted it anyway and the bulk of a haiku is to be in the readers mind not the poet's pen