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haiku 34

a cold day 
with the furnace humming--
warm cat

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  1. Date: 2/4/2013 6:16:00 AM
    ahhhh yes, those cats will lie on their nice warm pillow and hum. The cold finally arrived this week. Am not feeling any oats, I hate to work in the cold. But I have enjoyed letting the two cats sleep inside this week. Got to run. Spray painting.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:48:00 AM
    this one made me smile. My cat, Chester, is an indoor/outdoor cat, but he don't stay out very long when it's this cold outside. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:13:00 AM
    awesome haiku friend Debbie :)..I like cats..Good day and thanks for stopping by. Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:26:00 PM
    Well I see the kitty curled on a braided rug by the flickering logs of the fire and me going for marshmallows ;) love you bunches. Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 2:31:00 PM
    As usual, wonderful, my dear Debbie! You are the best... hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:22:00 AM
    We should be like the cat ......well written Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:21:00 PM
    Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 1:58:00 PM
    This made me smile

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Andie it wouldn't be wrong to say [warm cat on my lap] except that it is unnecessary, you put the cat where you as the reader wanted it anyway and the bulk of a haiku is to be in the readers mind not the poet's pen

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 4:45:00 AM
    nice thought ;)))))

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Lol, a happy feline. Sounds toasty and purrfect :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:14:00 PM
    Soup Mail!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:58:00 PM
    Debs, I like this. But would it be so wrong to say "warm cat on my lap" that would sound so inviting to me!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 3:53:00 PM
    There's a happy cat there within that house! This is a stupendous write my friend, I really enjoyed reading it tonight! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 3:08:00 PM
    Nice little haiku here, Debbie. Regarding my Carpe Diem poem, which was written as an example to the contest, LEKKER.... Please read my blog by the same name (which I am referring to in the contest rules) and you should get my drift. LEKKER is a word which transcends language Kapish? Hope you have a great week. Love, Su