Haiku 33

dripping garments loosely hung on a limb - two sets

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/9/2020 10:31:00 PM

So suggestive. Fabulous.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/11/2020 11:55:00 AM

Thanks. That's what I was going for!

Michael Ainsley

Date: 5/29/2013 1:07:00 PM

With a twist I say when the last line brings it togeather, Nice twist Timothy! Be always as happy as your smile looks like you are. Good vibration.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/29/2013 9:53:00 PM

Thanks Michael! I've been seeing your name quite a lot, but haven't checked out your page yet... that's going to change! Thanks for the kind words on my haiku... it's a fun mental game for me.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2013 9:41:00 AM

- Beautiful haiku, Timothy! - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 11:39:00 PM

Thanks Anne for your visit.

Michael Dom

Date: 5/26/2013 3:00:00 AM

nicely done. i'm liking the subtelty Tim. cheers!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Mike!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/26/2013 1:19:00 AM

Beautiful and not overstated! Hmmmmm...great job! :)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Eileen... I was going for subtlety :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2013 12:43:00 AM

oh, timothy, first time i saw this, I thought it said hung on a lamb. hahaha. I think I need to get to sleep. My eyes are crossing!!!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/26/2013 8:46:00 AM

Hahaha... well that sounds vaguely morbid! Get some shuteye, my friend :)