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Haiku 2

dry brown cracking fields at noon south wind touch cloud peaks fresh start adventure (c) Olive Eloisa 2:32pm July 24, 2014

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/7/2015 2:50:00 AM

nice win ;)

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 8/13/2014 11:36:00 AM

Great one!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/11/2014 8:23:00 AM

Love ur haiku dear, n love the fresh start adventure, congrats on fine win dear Olive!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 10:08:00 PM

Nice imagery, congrats on the win, Eloisa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 8:06:00 PM

It's good to see you on this list today. Congrats, Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 1:53:00 PM

Thanks much Andie,.:)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2014 6:48:00 PM

very beautiful haiku Olive congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 7:45:00 PM

Thanks much Jan ..:) GBU

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/31/2014 12:33:00 AM

anytime...PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 7:07:00 PM

Olive, love the fresh start feeling..Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/30/2014 6:07:00 PM

Thank you Lolli Linda..:)

James Fraser

Date: 7/26/2014 2:56:00 PM

And soon the droplets of nature, will grace her wonderful grounds. Within days her greens will bloom, and her greenery abounds <*> Fine Haiku Olive, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/30/2014 5:37:00 PM

Thanks you so much James..:D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2014 1:10:00 PM

very beautiful. If you say winds, it will agree with the verb touch!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/30/2014 5:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea..:) God bless you..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/24/2014 5:37:00 PM

This haiku is the first step to a new journey. May it be a pleasant one that ends in total satisfaction. Best of luck to you Olive_eloi!:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/30/2014 5:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul..:) I hope too I am praying for it to be a success..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/24/2014 11:40:00 AM

Lovely haiku Olive! God bless you dear!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/30/2014 4:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Dr. Upma..:)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/24/2014 9:52:00 AM

Beautiful, Olive...every day should be a "fresh start adventure" Hope you are doing well, my friend.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/30/2014 4:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Fate for the generous comment..:)