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haiku 29

an open portal
the moon lies in a pink sky --
snores sound

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:51:00 AM
    I am really enjoying these poems from your recent trip. Must have been very inspirational.

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Hey Very nice!Happy New Year!!

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 12:22:00 PM
    do they echo.... those snores?

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 5:31:00 AM
    ow how loove your haiku dear Ma.Happy New Year with big hugs...ku hai :).Thanks for all your help re haiku.. X x

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 2:09:00 AM
    not only visual, but sound, Happy New Year, Debbie, like this

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 5:10:00 PM
    I see the imagery!!!NICE!!~ Gezzzzzzzz I guess I need to pay attention......Typing away in dream land!!!!U Have soupmail!!!Thank you-

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 9:12:00 AM
    Missed your poems.... Nice haiku. Funny too. Love, Mehnaz.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:24:00 AM
    SHeesh! Tried to comment to blogs, to send a mail to Soup and kept getting that freaking 500 message! Hope soup fixes it soon. okay, will try again to comment on your blog.. it worked HERE.. there???

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:23:00 AM
    Trying to comment. Does this work?

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 1:49:00 AM
    It's a real haiku, for many haikus posted on the Net are not haikus...

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 9:23:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, gotta love this one. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 7:58:00 PM
    Honestly Deb, I don't believe a reiki master snores! Who's the lucky chap? jimbo

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:56:00 PM
    This one is funny, Debs. it sounds romantic and then that awful snoring sound!!

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:44:00 PM
    Welcome back Debbie, I miss you and your lovely poems, I hope your Christmas was a good one, and I hope the New Year will be filled with peace love and joy for you, Happy New Year xxxx

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 3:48:00 PM
    You're back and with a good one , welcome back xx

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 3:44:00 PM
    lovely haiku xoxo pd