Haiku

a cricket in the eaves harmonizes with night rain ================== old river benue a fisherman's canoe ladened for market ================== graveyard's windy dust sending papers and leaves high every ones underground

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:30:00 PM

Charles,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/14/2011 11:15:00 AM

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/6/2011 7:26:00 AM

Nice to see this series of Haiku Charles. You have become very good with this form. I am stuck on the old form and this one does not seem to work that well for me. It is like stating a fact from your perspective. Good for you on this. love mom

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2011 11:16:00 PM

Charles, deep and awesome... how you doing? ..p.d.