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haiku 22

a lover's heart
scars the aged beech --
silent wood

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:18:00 PM
    Wow Debbie! Great observation and thoughts here! I read this as an endearment and how overtime love can becomes less words and talking, and older couples start relishing in those moments of silence... just BEING in each others presence... what more could you want? Btw I've responded to all your wonderful and thoughtful comments on my haiku... I appreciate your constructive criticism and your keen eye for an effective poem.

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:21:00 PM
    Depending how you read this one, there can be a sinister aspect to the words. Well done!

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/22/2012 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry only concerned with self...and its own life..scaring the life of the tree..decades later one wonders if the lovers still are one or if their love like the cut in the tree has scabbed over
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:30:00 AM
    I love this one, Debs.

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 12:04:00 AM
    yes awesome, Debbie, a lot one can think about this..

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, what a great Haiku my friend, good write. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 12:06:00 PM
    ooooooooooooooooooh. ME LIKE! Now, oh Obiwan, please tell me, I see this as objective, even though it has rich metaphor and depth. Am I right? This IS objective, isn't it? I really liked how you did this. (A gift today. My girl is playing with her fisher price toys, HAPPY, and I am doing a bit of reading and commenting. It is so nice.) hugs and love, Dee

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:41:00 AM
    wonderful haiku, Deb. hugs. :) Catie

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:15:00 AM
    cool, yep very cool xx