Haiku 1

The smell that brought back memories An acquainted scent... That of soft, wet mud stepped on.. Oh! The good old days A haiku - 5 7 5 Syllable Count

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/15/2015 10:10:00 AM

Some scents do linger in our memories ..Dont they.Lovely!

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2015 10:12:00 AM

Yes, they do!! Thank you so much!! :D

Doris Jamoner

Date: 10/17/2014 12:36:00 PM

For Love speaks out so quietly In the need to share.

Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/17/2014 12:41:00 PM

-____- sorry I wrote the comment above in a wrong place.. I just want and suppose to say Congratz u deserve to win but I wrote something else kinda sleepy hehe! Congratz again!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/17/2014 7:00:00 AM

beautifully painted picture

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/16/2014 9:03:00 AM

It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Sneha.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/16/2014 7:49:00 AM

Hey girl, where ya been! I can back to see if you wrote anything new, hope you can post something soon, HugsXX

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/16/2014 5:59:00 AM

Nice images , Sneha, congrats on the win

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2014 5:03:00 AM

beautifully penned haiku many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 10/15/2014 11:53:00 PM

No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2014 3:33:00 PM

This is a very cute one for nostalgia, sweetie. thanks for letting me know you had done a new one!

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/1/2014 6:41:00 AM

This is very good! I really enjoy it and your syllable count is perfect! I wouldn't change a thing :) Great to read you girl. Hugsxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2014 3:22:00 AM

- Lovely haiku, Sneha - I know the smell :) .... "Oh! The good old days" !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)