Haiku 19

Intense sensation, the essence of an instant. Into liquid bliss.

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Raul Moreno

Date: 3/9/2013 1:07:00 PM

Loved the last line, nice work.

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/9/2013 1:23:00 PM

Thanks for reading it, Raul. Jack

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2013 6:53:00 AM

Jack. super...David

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/3/2013 9:01:00 AM

Thanks! I appreciate the comment. J

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2013 11:54:00 PM

wow, what a great way to describe bliss.

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/3/2013 9:00:00 AM

Good stuff, that bliss... J

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2013 11:35:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Jack. - Sending you some sunshine! Right now I am enjoying a warm and lovely spring sunshine in Turkey ..... GORGEOUS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/3/2013 9:00:00 AM

Enjoy your sunny trip! J

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2013 9:57:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn..Thanks for your presence at my work this morn..Your comment was uplifting..Sara

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/2/2013 10:46:00 AM

You're welcome. I enjoyed reading your work. K

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2013 9:57:00 AM

Good morning Jack, great intense imagery... love the way it all dissolves... always~ LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 3/2/2013 10:46:00 AM

Good Saturday to you as well. Thanks for the comment and the visit. j