Haiku

wind blown fall leaves dance reminding me of my journey tossed and turned each day

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/15/2021 12:13:00 PM

Love your ku!

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/25/2010 3:30:00 PM

A lovely haiku, James,....and deserving this featured place! Perfectly beautiful! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 11:19:00 AM

Congrats Jimbo on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great Haiku from u to share with us all ... excellent choice to feature ...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/24/2010 5:59:00 AM

Congrats Jim on this bweing featured loved the imagery in this one nice play on words here thanks for sharing keep up the great work

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2010 3:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/11/2009 11:44:00 AM

Nice analogy, nice haiku...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/5/2009 7:13:00 AM

Thanks Jim, I am more than pale, would probably scare a child ~lol~ that struck me funny. Thanks for your get well wishes, going back to bed, blah. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/19/2009 11:20:00 PM

Subtle words describe a nice metaphor of life. nice work...Raul

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/10/2009 5:43:00 AM

wonderful

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/10/2009 5:31:00 AM

Beautiful poem James, much meaning.