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Haiku 07

wind blasts trees naked as newborn birds... snowflakes cascading 5th Place Winner Any New or Old Haiku Will Do Contest by Sidney~LeeAnn

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Dillon Lewis

Date: 1/27/2012 8:24:00 PM

i enjoy these, very nice

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/23/2011 4:36:00 PM

another fine win to congratulate you for Carol ..Happy thanks giving to you and yoursl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2011 11:41:00 AM

Thank you to everyone. Love, Carol

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/20/2011 8:34:00 AM

Marvelous! Congratulations on your 5th place win!Thank you for all comments on my poem,Carol.Lovingly,FABIYAS

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/20/2011 5:08:00 AM

Congrats you for your nice win. Thanks, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/20/2011 2:40:00 AM

Congrats on your win x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2011 8:52:00 PM

Congrats Carol on a stunning win for excellent poetry my friend..luv..

David Williams

Date: 11/19/2011 11:39:00 AM

Carol congrats on your win, great use of imagery..many thanks for your ever appreciated comments..David

Onyebuchi Okonkwo

Date: 11/19/2011 11:04:00 AM

smooth imagery.congrats Carol...O.O.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:15:00 AM

CArol, this was truly one of the best of them all. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/19/2011 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this wonderful poem, Carol

Skat A

Date: 11/18/2011 11:59:00 PM

C.B., Congrats in my contest~SID

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2011 11:27:00 PM

wow, now here is a really nice one that I missed. I think you are getting quite good at these, CArol!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/16/2011 12:44:00 PM

Lovely haiku. Many congrats on all your wins too, my friend : )

John Freeman

Date: 11/16/2011 12:05:00 PM

Vivid picture here Carol, great job lady. Agape, Moses

J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/14/2011 9:57:00 PM

Beautiful! :) Grrreat poem! *rawr*DWB

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/10/2011 9:20:00 AM

I think rules are made to be broken for this gives satisfaction to read!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/9/2011 6:15:00 PM

you need a different line 2 which is not a metaphor...no poetic vehicles such as simile metaphor or personification are used in haiku except occasionally alliteration...

J.W. Earnings
Date: 11/14/2011 9:58:00 PM

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 11/10/2011 5:00:00 AM

As it is your contest and you want it a certain way I will remove this from your contest. I can not write what does not make sense to me. If I did it would be your poem not mine. Thank you. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2011 10:48:00 AM

I have to say that this poem is a better version of Haiku 06! You did an awesome job of the other Haiku, and this one is better than that one! Congratulations of a job very well done!!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/9/2011 10:43:00 AM

* “I Love The Image of Snowflakes Cascading * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Yet for Reason I Was Left Perhaps With A Slight Concern for That Baby Bird *.* Hopefully It Was Not Their Fluffy Precious Innocent Feathers * Floating Through The Blast, of Wind *.* Very Sweet My Dear * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 11/9/2011 6:54:00 AM

Lovely write!!!---Lori