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Guns are dangerous

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Guns are dangerous

G uns are dangerous objects in this modern age
U nless your stupid all safety rules you must engage
N ot a  gun or bullet clip in sight or left around
S ensible behaviour keeps everybody safe and sound

A gun can bring pleasure in the right hands
R evolvers are known as six shooters, many brands
E ach should be registered with the police I understand

D anger is always abound when guns are in sight
A s long as guns are in use can cause a fright
N o one should have one unless well informed 
G un clubs are excellent for teaching you how to perform
E xcellent chances to go out on a shoot
R evel in the opportunities to watch, be astute
O rderly conduct keeps everyone safe
U ntil the day comes when shootings stop
S afety first must be right there at the top

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  1. Date: 1/18/2013 4:07:00 PM
    Nice work

    Date: 1/18/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Chris
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:02:00 AM
    Seren,, this should be sent to every gun club across the planet,,,as a "Mission Statement" wonderful and logical poetry at it's best...

    horsman Avatar harry horsman
    Date: 1/16/2013 4:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well i do
    Date: 1/16/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry, no one listens to a lone voice ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 4:17:00 AM
    This is an excellent and wondrous write my friend! I truly loved reading this very critical and important poem this morning! I believe that everyone should fully understand the power of a gun before owning one, and know the damage that it can create! It can shatter a life if not used correctly, as you said, you must be astute! What a tremendous piece you have written here Seren, I really enjoyed it! Great Work!!

    Date: 1/16/2013 4:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow Russell you flatter me, thank you.