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Guillotine of Clouds

Who you know was claimed
By the guillotine of clouds
When the neck touched dirt

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 8:26:00 AM
    Hi Eric, a very cool haiku. , Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Hello Eric - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Thomas Avatar Eric Thomas
    Date: 6/18/2013 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Anne, I appreciate the feedback. Please check out my other poems; I know I'll check your's out, :).
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:18:00 PM
    the haiku syllables is perfect. Eric, great on the imagery. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

    Thomas Avatar Eric Thomas
    Date: 6/18/2013 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello, Linda. First off, thank you for your input; I appreciate the invite too, l.o.l. I usually rap, but I want to branch out to other forms of art--essays, short stories, poetry (as you can see), singing, journalism, etc.); I love to write, :). B.t.w., I like your poem "Summer's Eve"; it depicts a woman--not a bitch, or broad--very aptly, :).
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Please comment; I'd like feedback.