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Guidance

Oh darling, from the start you were damaged in such a way there were millions of ways to put you back together again.Your knuckles bleed such a dark substance I was unaware you were made of this thickness.Slowly you fell to the ground I watched you scream in pain no one ever discovered.Tremor was all I felt flowing throughout my body as I screamed with you from the top of my heart.Quickly you turned to look at me and questioned my determination of madness you’ve created in me.My only response was to wipe away your tears and tell you you’re not in this world alone, that you don’t have to scar your knuckles no longer, that i’m here to help you walk when you feel your legs weakin and can’t bare the pain no longer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/20/2016 3:45:00 PM
Mikayla , , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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