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Grim

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Grim

Gruesome of appearance, the dungeon a fearful place
Rusty chains hanging down, iron maiden by the wall 
It was a harsh stern place that spoke volumes of pain
Made worse by gloomy creepy shadows casting monsters

written 08/24/2013

contest: Four Letter Words - An Acrostic Challenge

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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:02:00 PM
    Shadow, i like the word you write of... grim... congrats...Linda

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/5/2013 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Linda life can be grim sometimes ty Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/4/2013 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sara Ty for visiting my work again, also for congrats Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 3:03:00 PM
    This is very descriptive Shadow....congratulations

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/2/2013 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Donna and ty so much am starting to feel better too hate being ill Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:13:00 PM
    Shadow, congrats on your win with this descriptive acrostic! Love, Kim

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/2/2013 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Kim and ty glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:06:00 PM
    Shadow, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/2/2013 2:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Skat ty dear so glad you liked it Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:07:00 AM
    Well executed acrostic - the gruesome scenario works well to accentuate the title. Very well penned.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/2/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Vicky and Ty very much for comments and congrats Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:36:00 PM
    you painted the grim scene well...congrats on your win :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/2/2013 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sandra hi and ty so much really nice of you Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:59:00 PM
    I like the much description of a dungeon in this one. Congrats on your win, Shadow.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 9/2/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea hi and ty for liking it and for congrats Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:35:00 PM
    I like the mood of this piece. Great entry!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/24/2013 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Richard have a great W/E dear Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 3:40:00 PM
    you described it well Shadow...great write

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/24/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Joseph a fun contest gl to you too Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Wow....awesome Shadow....

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/24/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Donna appreciated Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 7:38:00 AM
    An interesting challenge and you came forth with an awesome work..Reads like winners' circle to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit of congrats..Sara

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/24/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It was a struggle hope I pulled it off Sara be interesting to read the others Ty for visiting Shadow x smile