Green Mist

Mountain dawn-- a parrot's call fades in the green mist By: kash poet Date:18th March

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 9:08:00 AM

HI Kash, I can't wish you a happy fourth of July for a guy from INdia, but i hope you are having a great day. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/1/2013 12:31:00 PM

helllo??.. catching up on your pieces i missed when i was absent... another fine gem of a 'ku, buddy!.: huggs!

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2013 3:12:00 PM

great haiku - Congrats on your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2013 2:42:00 PM

Kash, I saw you asking if the haiku for Susan had to use regular 5/7/5 or not. I hope not because the one I did is not quite five syllables in line one. Hopefully susan does not mind. I think she is broad minded that way. How are you?

David Williams

Date: 4/7/2013 7:51:00 AM

Kash, great image, you ok?...David

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/5/2013 4:36:00 AM

This goes to my favs..Its beautiful.When i want to get inspiration to write haiku.might as well stay here reading yours.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/2/2013 1:54:00 AM

Love the haiku kash,

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/1/2013 5:16:00 AM

Perfect blending of color in this startling vision! Love, Lizzie

Terry L. Allen

Date: 3/25/2013 7:47:00 PM

This says it all and sets the stage all the way down to the steaming jungle. Huggs TLee

David Williams

Date: 3/24/2013 12:29:00 PM

Kash, another stunner, well done...David

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/24/2013 10:13:00 AM

Cool picture you paint! I find the parrot tied with the green mist really lovely and calming to think about... makes me wanna go explore a jungle in the early morning. Well penned!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/24/2013 6:31:00 AM

Tranquil, peaceful...jimbo

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/22/2013 8:49:00 AM

orginal haiku, Kash!! Love it!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2013 9:34:00 PM

Kash, Congratulations, with your winning poem. Thank you for supporting my "Green" contest. Always :-) Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2013 6:28:00 PM

Kash, you knew my nursery rhymes. Cool. The middle one was Little Bo Peep.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2013 3:13:00 PM

It's added on the bottom of the poem now!! (the name of your poem that goes with mine) How are you doing today, kashinath? Miss not seeing you as active lately!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2013 12:50:00 AM

hi, and bye. haha. It's so late but I had to stay here a long time to catch up Thanks for reminding me the name of that poem. I had wanted to mention it when I first entered the contest but I forgot the name of your poem. I will go add it to my work now.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/19/2013 1:58:00 AM

such magic in your Haiku Kash...

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/18/2013 3:18:00 PM

What a tremendous and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this afternoon! This is a delightful piece, such a magnificent poem, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2013 3:11:00 PM

Beautiful, Kash!! Good to see you back here today!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/18/2013 2:34:00 PM

nice one!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/18/2013 2:03:00 PM

A wonderful haiku, Kash! I like it! Love, Kim