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Green Eyed Monster

There’s a green eyed monster over there Sitting stubborn upon a chair Watching every move I make He’s waiting till I make a mistake But jealousy will get him know where I do what I want and do what I dare He can look and he can stare He won’t be stopped if he starts to flare So he’ll have to learn to swallow his pride The jealousy stuff he holds inside Don’t let that green old monster out He’s starts to roar and starts to shout This is a battle he needs to learn To control his temper and not be stern If he refuses to play the ball He could end up, just losing it all Sometimes anger gets the best of him His jealousy rages from within I’ve told him before don’t lose your cool Jealousy just makes you look a fool I know he’s the hulk but I don’t care He’s very tender and likes to share I just feel sorry for the other men Because when he’s angry he’s not their friend He's a green mean fighting machine Huge muscles bulging firm and lean They call him the hulk, but he's just a teen He's a massive bulk and can be mean So I warn you now don’t come too close If he turns green you could end up toast He’s just watches me from a far Making sure nothing bizarre © Copyright KC.Leake 27th March 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/30/2015 5:55:00 AM
Good topic...your light hearted approach entices the reader in the door....using humor is often more powerful than pulling hearts rings...in this case it works well! The last verse is fun!
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/30/2015 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Victoria, I truly appreciate that comment. Bless you Kevin
Date: 3/28/2015 6:55:00 AM
- Kevin great read Phatt Matt
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/28/2015 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Phatt, I appreciate your comment. Take Care Kevin
Date: 3/27/2015 6:19:00 PM
This poem put a smile on my face Kevin..I do remember hulk : )..An entertaining poem about green jealousy : )
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/28/2015 3:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Charma, I'm really glad it made you smile!! Keep Smiling Kevin
Date: 3/27/2015 3:59:00 AM
- Kevin, I enjoy reading this with a smile - "Green eyed monster" a perfect title !!! - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/27/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Anne, So glad it made you smile and you have a lovely weekend too Bless you Kevin
Date: 3/27/2015 2:50:00 AM
great fun write Kevin - I too have done a poem about jealousy with a very similar title - It was possibly for a contest can't remember now lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/27/2015 11:10:00 AM
Hi Jan, Glad you enjoyed it, we could all do with some humor most of the time. Thanks for reading Bless you Kevin
Date: 3/27/2015 2:41:00 AM
Lol, I enjoyed. And I will stay far away too:-)
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/27/2015 11:09:00 AM
Hi Njeri, Glad it made you laugh Bless you Kevin
Date: 3/27/2015 2:41:00 AM
Very nice pen Kevin! A very humorous one, dear friend. Very amusing piece.Enjoyed! It reminded me of the incredible hulk. A 7! Thank you for sharing! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 3/27/2015 11:08:00 AM
Thank You Dorian for the wonderful comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it. God Bless Kevin

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