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Green Blades

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Green Blades

Sidewalk destitutes

In the cracks of forgetting

Tenacious green blades

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  1. Date: 6/18/2010 11:30:00 PM
    I think this is very much how a haiku is supposed to be, Juxtopositon, or whatever they call it. That is what you use here, and I don't see it done too often here at Soup, which is why the contests to me are more about three line descriptive poems than what the modern haiku is really supposed to be about!

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 4:06:00 AM
    Thank you for this most enjoyable read Scott. Please continue with your writing and we will read. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 11:49:00 PM
    Yes, life will find a way. Nice haiku, Scott! Hugs, Donna