Green

green smooth grass all covered in white… bowled by jack

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2013 9:34:00 PM

Seren, Congratulations, with your winning poem. Thank you for supporting my "Green" contest. Always :-) Linda

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/21/2013 9:58:00 PM

Thank you Linda ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/18/2013 11:44:00 AM

nice one Sass you are getting a clever gal xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/18/2013 12:32:00 PM

No Mandy not clever, have to invent a word for me ...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/18/2013 4:36:00 AM

I'd have to go with David, here Seren, this is clever poetry,,, you really are good at these Haikus... eleven syllables and yet still room for the imagination,, i like that...hope you are ok... Harry

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/18/2013 11:29:00 AM

glad you understood it as well ...Seren

David Williams

Date: 3/18/2013 2:51:00 AM

Seren oh very very clever....

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/18/2013 3:57:00 AM

Thank you Dafydd, must be a nationaltrait boomboom. Lol

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/17/2013 7:50:00 PM

Jumping jack frost joyously gets the grass often times my friend! But in the end the green always come through! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! What a delightful Haiku!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/17/2013 7:57:00 PM

oh you got it wrong this time, was thinking of a bowling green, they wear white and the marker is called a jack. But i like your idea