Get Your Premium Membership

Greatest Moment Ever

Just love how the pieces they come together you and I a feeling so uplifting like to perfect souls match one could not have wished for more so at peace in your company love having you around Inspiring this heart to do greater things life ahead shines inspirational in my writing with you Dancing in dreamlike clouds of the purest white oh fair maiden awakening beside a Queen to look upon love struck in awe Mist moist most lovingly falls from these eyes as you lay sleeping Thinking back I pulled hair away from your face just lay there staring at you darling Wow dazzling beautiful enters my space just leaned over so soft gently a peck light brushing Looking to the Heavens thanking God for such a gift Kissed you as you slept whispering softly into your dreams I love you babe Tears fell that night in so much warm happiness one of the happiest nights I ever had When these eyes just kissed you darling a thousand times in one flash Warms the very air that you breathe whom looks amazing jewel perfect

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/8/2014 3:07:00 PM
Fundamental atmosphere of every poet in the universe. Honestly you described it. I love her. Because she is not only your lover but also me. It's your great success...Now the poem is universal....Best wishes from India...
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/8/2014 4:17:00 PM
sandip thank you so kindly from ireland sending you an irish blessing wonderful comment
Date: 10/7/2014 7:51:00 PM
The last line to last long.
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/7/2014 8:32:00 PM
smiling thank you muhamma bless you for the lovely comment greatly appreciated
Date: 10/7/2014 5:27:00 PM
Liam . . . You passion, emotion, and romantic feeling all come together in this very beautiful piece at achieve a most pleasing and truly magnificent result. Enjoyed this one immensely!! All the best my very good friend . . . Gary
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/7/2014 5:41:00 PM
garry you brought a smile to my face thank you from the heart pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 10/5/2014 8:47:00 PM
Oh Liam how lovely that poem is, you sound so happy, hope this love lasts as long as ours, good luck my friend she sounds like a lovely lady, take care the two of you.............Vera...........
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 10:12:00 PM
i hope so to vera i pray for the strength each night thank you kindly for the touching beautiful comment bless you
Date: 10/5/2014 3:18:00 PM
I feel you happy..In each verse I can feel you smile,almost hugging the sky.Just beautiful Liam.
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 6:52:00 PM
i am happy tears in my eyes remembering that treasure moment yeah i smiled charmaine thank you dear friend for the kind beautiful comment pal ever so deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 10/5/2014 12:55:00 PM
breathless, liam.. what an affectionate, warm piece... huggs
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 1:22:00 PM
nette wonderful comment thank you so much heartfelt beautiful bless you
Date: 10/5/2014 12:19:00 PM
- What can I say: Woooow ..... "dazzling beautiful" ..... YES, it is!!!!! - Love it Liam !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 12:31:00 PM
thank you anne lise for the dazzling beautiful comment bless you
Date: 10/5/2014 12:14:00 PM
for me, this is the kind of thing that I also feel would be my greatest moment. I have done that theme numerous times about one special night! Love it.
Login to Reply
Mcdaid Avatar
Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/5/2014 12:28:00 PM
andrea there is always that one moment smiling wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated

Book: Reflection on the Important Things