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Great Picture

By the windows do I see!
dark clouds moves at ease.
drops no heavy just drizzles,
breeze gentle brings chill.
sparrows fly low too slow.
turn ways, all eyes glow!
leaves big,small flew by breeze,
roll,slide, great show,eyes gaze! 
“Woof…” a dog, as if lightning! runs
my great picture, new world gone!
was there to see again: my zeal!
again could I sense that great feel!

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  1. Date: 10/28/2013 2:50:00 PM
    Love your nature poems. You take me there.....when shut in, words are so transporting. keep writing dear friend. SuZ

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 1:59:00 AM
    hello jenish Back to say Hi I have been ill for over a week and travelling before that. Thanks for reading my poems and leaving happy messages Sure helps tomake me feel better. Love, Suzanne

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:21:00 AM
    - Jenish, nice written poem ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)