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Great Love Hurts

when your emails arrive they're full but not so alive your words are kind, nice your message very concise not a hint of  those things that you know ails or stings i should tell you enlighten you in the spaces there are signs what i read between the lines i  see and more i feel the acid rain drops that are soaked in your pain it feels like bullets against my hide like a red hot iron buried in my side i would like to say sorry sorry that you hurt. sorry in thinking of me you veil your truth though you know it's a seedless fruit inside you, what now must feel like an empty shell there is still the you the one that always rang the bell you know you are still yourself unpressed the person i know that always impressed but cuts don't heal from raw facts they hide irritated in burlap sacks behind a plastic mask inside an empty flask love-hurt spreads more than any tear not just here or there but everywhere it reflects any and all reason lives void of all of any season no spring winter summer or fall it is tossed and bounced like a ball left to its own devices it morphs becomes a crisis but you can't let it own you just like yesterday this too it will be tomorrow days follow in a row grab a very large clock one with a key and a lock only you can turn the hand and stop the flow of sand happy is a minute away choose it now, today Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Contest Name: Enter a poem I have not commented on (YET) #1

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Date: 10/24/2015 5:48:00 AM
Looking for you in your oldies, Armand. Even in your early writes, one can already sense the deep sensitivity of your lines. Would love to read some more...hugs!
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Date: 3/23/2015 6:24:00 PM
Maurice, happy is a minute away, I must remember that for I am sad most of the time, congratulations on a wonderful win in the contest, this is a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:44:00 PM
HELLO MAURICE, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:23:00 PM
This one seems so heartfelt and personal, Maurice. I am guessing it is an ex, but I am not sure. One that really makes me curious!!
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:26:00 PM
You are dead on.
Date: 8/14/2014 8:19:00 PM
Oh our children [and I'm sure they say - Oh Ma!] my son & I are very emotional & we seem to feed off each other [not in a good way - we both want so much for the other to approve!] I've found [believe it or not] communication much clearer in texts!I have mentioned this to others with anxiety issues & they have found it a help too. - Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I would label your verse couplet BUT when in doubt Verse is always safe! Light & Love
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Date: 8/14/2014 7:50:00 AM
I too can be a measurer of words so I understand the act of holding back. This is a testament to the unspoken and the impact of those spaces. The proverbial elephant in the room. I raise a glass to finding the courage to say what needs to be said. Another fine piece of writing.
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