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Gravity

Gravity Real force spinning A weight on my knees Veritable science nonfiction In a moment the apple fell, Newton noticed Trusted source of orbiting satellite's permanence Youth's nemesis

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David Aaron

Date: 3/4/2016 1:32:00 PM

That last line...perfection. A great poem.

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/29/2021 5:35:00 AM

Thank you!

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 1:06:00 PM

So, I'm just here enjoying. Awesome force to keep on ground. Lol

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/29/2021 5:36:00 AM

Thank you. have a good week. 8-]

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 1:05:00 PM

Like Joe. On the bottom I thought I'd look you up. Miss seeing the first faces who supported me long ago ...

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/29/2015 6:27:00 AM

Hello Doris, I just thought to look you up I had the idea you were not posting.. I see you are however..' I think this is both a fun and true write of you're observations..'

Angie Thomas

Date: 5/19/2015 12:40:00 PM

nice one :)

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/29/2021 5:37:00 AM

thank you.8-]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2015 5:56:00 AM

Interesting work..I had not noticed that you had been back on then I saw that your Avatar had changed..Youth's nemesis gravity.In the full force of its nemesis right now for it has me plastered to the chair..LOL..Mom

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/2/2015 7:33:00 PM

funny one mom. me too.

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 4/14/2015 6:27:00 PM

An interesting and well done acrostic...

Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/29/2021 5:36:00 AM

thank you! 8-]