Gravity

shy Selene enthralled by Gaia’s bitter sweet spell magnetic allure ---------------------------------------- Contest: Picture This # 1 Sponsor: SKAT A 22nd May 2014 Placing: 2nd

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/4/2014 12:41:00 PM

LOL... Salt punishments... Now that is a thought...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 9:11:00 PM

Oh, no! I turned my head, what happens next... Do I get zombiefied... LOL...JK

Paul Callus
Date: 9/4/2014 8:18:00 AM

Hope not! but you might be made to write a poem about zombies or salt statues as a punishment:) ... me JK too:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 10:52:00 AM

Yes, I do have to answer this :) One step at a time. I think, accepting would be my first step, and I have to say, i'm almost there. Hugs...Linda

Paul Callus
Date: 9/3/2014 3:37:00 PM

Great.....now look ahead, and do not dare turn your head...:)) hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 10:15:00 AM

Paul, I'm trying hard to come back.... LOl,,, I'm so bad, trying to see all the replies left in my comments... have a sweet day..Linda

Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2014 12:26:00 PM

Take care Linda....a comeback to me means going forward...a step at a time. [now...you do not have to answer this:)] // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 11:40:00 AM

Anytime Paul...hope you are well

Paul Callus
Date: 8/24/2014 3:27:00 PM

Hi Linda!! Lovely to see you again. I'm doing fine, thanks, though my hectic Parisian holiday took its toll!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:51:00 PM

thank you for supporting me and my comments...Linda

Paul Callus
Date: 8/7/2014 5:46:00 AM

You're welcome Linda...anytime:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/9/2014 7:50:00 PM

Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2014 6:15:00 PM

Many thanks, Debbie. Take care. // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 7:28:00 PM

I like the allure.....Congrats Tim

Paul Callus
Date: 7/10/2014 6:14:00 PM

Thank you, Tim; I appreciate the visit. // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 5:40:00 PM

Ooh thats different, I like it :) grats on your win ;)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 6:06:00 PM

Thank you Casarah; it's always encouraging to be on the winners' list:) // paul

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

Date: 7/9/2014 12:09:00 PM

Hi Paul Callus Hearty Congrats for your #1 position.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 2:56:00 PM

Many thanks for your wishes on my poem having placed in 2nd position. // paul

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/9/2014 3:48:00 AM

A wonderful write you have there! A well deserved win Paul! :-)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 4:58:00 AM

Thank you Teddy! Your 'harmonic anarchy' also appealed to me...and to the judge! // paul

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 7/9/2014 2:57:00 AM

Beautifully done. Congrats.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 5:01:00 AM

Hi Mark! Glad you liked it. Many thanks. Enjoyed your centrifugal force! // paul

Joseph May

Date: 7/8/2014 9:59:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 1:43:00 AM

Thank you Joseph; I enjoyed your blue gem haiku, too. // paul

Greg Hoffman

Date: 7/8/2014 9:30:00 PM

Congrats on your win,nicely done

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 1:44:00 AM

Thank you, Greg, for the wishes and the visit. cu // paul

David Mohn

Date: 7/8/2014 8:21:00 PM

Congats Paul...A+ on originality

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 1:35:00 AM

Thank you David, you are too kind. I enjoyed your 'jealous earth' entry! // paul

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 7:29:00 PM

Ahh! Gravitate to each other's very clever my friend.. Congrats on a great win my friend! Hugs... Arlene

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2014 1:30:00 AM

Thank you Arlene; you read it well:) It was lovely to see you on the winning list, too! (...and lovely avatar, by the way...) // paul

Theresa Stephens

Date: 7/8/2014 5:14:00 PM

Hi Paul, Congrats on your win. Cleverly done Haiku. Well done on your win.Regards Theresa xx

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2014 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Theresa for the wishes and unfailing supportive remarks. /x/ paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2014 3:35:00 PM

Big congrats for your win. Almost forgot about this contest!! Loved the Selene allusion.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2014 5:14:00 PM

Yes, I too had forgotten about it, so the result came as a pleasant surprise! Thank you Andrea...for the wishes and comments. // paul

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 2:53:00 PM

Lovely, Paul. Congratulations on a fine win.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2014 5:08:00 PM

Thank you Faye. Yes, it's a very satisfactory result, considering the amount of excellent entries. // paul

John Lawless

Date: 7/8/2014 1:27:00 PM

who can resist? Nicely done Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2014 2:22:00 PM

Glad you like my magnetic allure, John! Thank you. // paul

James Fraser

Date: 7/8/2014 10:06:00 AM

Magnetic they are, and out there, they're Stars in more ways than one. Beautiful capture of the 'Gravity' contest theme Paul. Many congratulations on your fine deserved placing in the contest, James......

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2014 2:20:00 PM

Thank you James; your haiku received deserved recognition...thus we finished on same podium! // paul