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Grasshopper Showcase

green grasshoppers- vivacious gazelles gaily observing nurtured exhibits gossamer winged butterflies gracefully signifying natures colourful kites gently touching floral parades perfumed yesterday, today tomorrow garnet geraniums whimsical gypsophila dainty daisies ravishing roses timid pansies different poses a gardens grasshopper showcase © September 2013- Kim van Breda-

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Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2014 10:21:00 PM

A wonderful write Kim...great imagery

Julie Clark

Date: 4/16/2014 12:05:00 AM

cool nice catchy poetry thank you

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/24/2013 11:19:00 AM

so playful and light, i am in a feel-good mood beause of this write, kim.. love the alliteration so naturally flowing within the lines... :) huggs

Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/24/2013 11:27:00 AM

Thank you Nette for stopping by my poems.. it was a bit of an 'out-the box' topic/connection, but I enjoyed the write. I have not been on P/Soup for some time, so great to get a notification to say someone had commented on one of my poems :).. Thanks for the inspiration to continue posting. xxx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/16/2013 8:55:00 AM

reading this makes one glad to be alive, for that Kim,, thank you....lovely poetry

Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/16/2013 11:47:00 AM

Thanks Harry... strange title, but I tried to make it works towards the glory of nature :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2013 10:45:00 AM

- Kim, clever and beautifully written - Wishing you a delightful Sunday! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/16/2013 11:48:00 AM

Thank0-you Anne Lise for your kind and encouraging feedback. Hope you are having a good week xx

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/15/2013 8:49:00 AM

I love the interesting wordflow with your "G" initiations on the 1st several lines. You set a great tone here. =D

Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/16/2013 11:51:00 AM

Hi Drake... was waiting for the 'experts feedback' on this one--- always appreciated ! I actually did a random word search of three words at a time and came up with the title but wanted to focus on nature anyway.. "Grasshoppers and Flowers"... hmmm.. not always compatible, except through 'poetic license' :)