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Grandma's New Shawl

Grandma shivers, and to warm her, I wrap an old faded shawl around her frail frame. A shawl she had hand woven many years ago. I hold her, and while she sleeps, she touches the worn threads. Her fingers move over the old design, of two faded red roses. Her eyes are closed. Perhaps, my Grandma's dreams are somewhere in the past, reviewing all her life's weavings. Suddenly Grandma's eyes open. She reaches out as her hands tremble over the old shawl. Her fingers seem to be tracing a new design over the faded roses, as if an intrinsically beautiful pattern is being revealed to her. Now I understand! Grandma is weaving a new shawl! Eagerly she leans forward. I watch her pick up one old loose thread, and firmly tie it to the new.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/17/2014 8:11:00 AM
Hi Darlene, Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem...I especially enjoyed the last three lines of the second stanza and also the last stanza.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 12/17/2014 4:28:00 PM
Hello, Joan Marie, thanks for sharing which parts of this poem you connected to the most. That was very helpful. Feedback like yours helps to identify the strongest lines, etc. I hoe you have a very Merry Christmas, Darlene
Date: 9/19/2014 9:05:00 AM
Sometimes it is good to repost once you are better known. The poem is very clear.
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Date: 9/18/2014 9:56:00 AM
I'm surprised that I am the first to comment on this lovely piece.
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 9/18/2014 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Richard, for the vote of confidence. I was wondering if perhaps I did not express myself in a way that could be understood. I am new here and comments mean a lot to me. :)

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