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I went shopping one day and wanted to try on those stilettoes but did not..The only way that I could wear them would be to sit down with them on my feet..Beautiful though aren't they...
Discount strip mall far away One store in mind to search yea A shoe store that has real styles Get lost there awhile Up and down rows more rows_shoes Danity, fancy, delicate_choose One catches eye_stilettoes Try maybe safely One pair with those high high heels Sit down slip one on sit still Lovely shoes beauty to see Stand up fall on knees Dodoitsu is suppose to be either about love or humorous I hope this one gives you a chuckle... Had written for Linda-Marie's contest but realized I had left the most important part out..

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Date: 9/12/2011 4:49:00 PM
You made me laugh with this one Sara grandma's are the greatest.Hope you have lots of luck in the contest friend.I've been under the weather for awhile but starting to feel better now so thanks for thinking of me.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 9/11/2011 3:07:00 AM
wonderful Sara, how are you? As for me i just got new internet service... so hope you will see more of me... haha! I love and enjoyed your entry,,, Good luck,..p.d.
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Date: 9/9/2011 11:08:00 PM
aha, you left out the prediction part?? hahaha. This is very cute. And yes, they are supposed to be funny or about love, so hopefully mine will strike people as funny.
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Date: 9/9/2011 12:22:00 PM
and please don't forget to put your name on your entry Sara..thankxxx...
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Date: 9/9/2011 12:21:00 PM
thankxxx for supporting my current contest Sara.. u still have time to fix if u need to luv..good luck.. read it fully ..funny..luv..
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Date: 9/9/2011 10:28:00 AM
LOL, thanks for a good laugh, my friend. I could just imagine this
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