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Got To Eye Ball It You Know Part 2 True Story

Did not take long, they came in a fancy ride Two young punks, prison tattoos and did not say much It was hot and I had to stay cool "Chris, are these the gentlemen from the South side" "Don't mind me boys, I use this old cane for a crutch" Wanted to let them know, my Mama did not raised a fool Like a drug scene out of a movie, I had to think fast "Hey Old Dude, you want us to get it out" "No Son, just leave it in the car" Cold water running through my veins, like a gun fighter in yesterday's past "Give me a minute, takes me awhile to move about "Most have caught you a pretty penny for this car" Both had their right hands at their waist, like ready to draw The shotgun was in the back seat of the car "Gentlemen, this a fine piece of artillery" "But I need the cash and that is the final straw" "Sorry boys, but that is all that I can do" "This old hot Sun sure is misery" I knew that it was stolen or maybe used in a crime Eye balls don't leave finger prints, never touched it Cause they were wanting this old white boy for their fall guy "Sorry men, maybe some other time" "Got to have some dollars to show a profit: "So adios, how us old white folks say good bye"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/25/2010 6:40:00 PM
lol.adios is how them old white folks say goodbye!? i love your humor(: haha. great story again. -always&forever Lynette
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:43:00 AM
OKAY DANNY I HOPE THIS IS THE LAST ONE ON YOUR SOUTH SIDE STORY. LOVE THE (ADIOS) IN YOUR POEM. GOT TO HAND IT TO YOU YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB ON THE SECOND PART AS MUCH AS THE FIRST PART. ANY OTHER GOOD READS JUST GIVE ME THE HEADS UP, AND THANK YOU FOR ENJOYING THE SLAM. TAKE CARE,,SKAT
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:02:00 AM
well done Danny, Glad to have read the second part to your part one. Thank you for your comment on this poem. Very nice of you kind Sir., enjoyed,..p.d.
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