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" GoodGrief! " How now then might truth be known~ Seems 'tis question thusly grown~ Of seeds sown in winds now blown~ Of which we all now surely groan~ Mayhap 'tis he who thinks other be me~ Should find manner in which so to see~ That then which could if'n he would~ Decide who's who & to whom we should~ I'll say this then of that & such~ 'Tis quite rightly a tad bit much~ To think that drink of similarity~ Is flask then empty of disparity~ He is he & I am me & not then thus no other~ Who cannot be me & so should be he I'd ruther~ T'other is he as well not thus so same as him~ Surely now we can see such chance is mighty slim~ SeaWolf ©

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  1. Date: 12/14/2011 9:47:00 AM
    Rightly so, is not so simple for one to find the who of someone while trapped elsewhere. Thought honed by past connaisance can make it difficult to move ahead? It's a shame, for there are multitudes of interestiong people to learn from, and with whom one may share. Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 6:08:00 PM
    I had to read it 3 times to sort out the wild structure you bring to verse. Never seen anything like it and I think it rocks with subtle wit. :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 11:49:00 PM
    you are the master of this form, another wonderful piece that I thoroughly enjoyed tonight, thank you

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 11:07:00 PM
    I liked the style and structure of this poem! Pretty awesome, I must say!! Always, Laura