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Goodbye

Standing beneath the midnight sky Up above us the clouds go passing by The moon so bright shone down its light And the cool ocean breeze caresses our skin As we hold each other tight My lover and I About to say our goodbyes Any day now he'll be gone and I'll be left all alone To gaze into the midnight sky As it rolls on and on and on......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/26/2016 11:51:00 AM
Hi, Carlene, thank you for the reply on the bottom. I have a question for you, You sent me a soup mail, yesterday. I haven't gotten a letter back. Did I answer your question correctly? :)
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Carlene Simpson
Date: 2/26/2016 2:33:00 PM
Not quite, but I think I have a hunch as to what is going on. The details I don't know, but i'll send u another soup mail later.
Date: 2/25/2016 8:04:00 PM
WE are left with a twinge of sadness but the beauty of that sky rolling on and on.
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Date: 2/24/2016 2:23:00 PM
Deep verse Carlene, it's a nice warm goodbye, the imagery is romantic until I read the sad departure. Nicely done. LINDA
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Carlene Simpson
Date: 2/24/2016 3:28:00 PM
Hey Linda, how r u?....if I was able to post pics i'ld show you the exact scenery.

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