Goodbye

Leafs fall Fall leaves Snow cascades Fairy tail dreams of virgin white Winter leaves me To spring raindrops They wash me away The summer heat torments and burns Fall arrives by the wind The wind takes me away I leave

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/3/2014 10:25:00 PM

Aw, sounds like you are lost from summer, we too had cold recently in Florida no less, you paint the picture well, Arthur

Paul Callus

Date: 10/31/2014 12:55:00 PM

Hi Arthur! That's how life's cycle turns...we pass through all the seasons of our life, till finally we are taken away, like leaves carried off by the wind. // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2014 5:30:00 PM

Thanks Paul, hope all is well with you.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 1:40:00 AM

Just a brilliant take on the seasons and really life in general.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2014 5:29:00 PM

Thank you kindly Maurice, you are a prince and a gentleman.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/24/2014 8:23:00 PM

love how you drew this arthur excellent pen

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:21:00 AM

Thank you kindly liam!

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/24/2014 2:35:00 PM

Wow baby, I have been missing you... let me be the ground where your leaves rest, let me be the air that you breath best, Let me take you away where there is no goodbyes, let there be light in your winter chilled eyes. Really do miss ya Sugar.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:21:00 AM

Thanks Cas, I hope to be more fully here soon, and I look forward to catching up with all of you!!!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/20/2014 11:12:00 PM

There's a really nice flow and cadence to this one. As the seasons come and go you're the last one to leave... most intriguing!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:20:00 AM

Or the first

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/20/2014 10:32:00 AM

:) rebirth must always be.. :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:20:00 AM

Thanks Olive :) hugs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/19/2014 6:38:00 PM

The imagery is just so amazing! Arthur, I love this wonderful piece! Excellent write, my friend! Pandita

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:19:00 AM

Thank you Pandita, very kind!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/19/2014 8:24:00 AM

Round and round....you will come back

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:18:00 AM

Hopefully soon, thanks!

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 10/19/2014 6:53:00 AM

Don't Leaf----life has many twist and Burns---along it's Win-ding road, but Snow one thing My Fall, it's the reason for the seasons and there is always time to Spring back

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:18:00 AM

LOL Jerry, just for that witty comment I will stick around for a wee bit! Thanks!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2014 5:47:00 AM

Hello goodbye, life is filled with both. What we think of a ending leads us back to rebirth. I enjoyed reading your poetry Arthur. You are indeed an entertaining fellow.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:17:00 AM

As are you Richard, thanks, I am not here as much, so forgive me, but I will soon get around to reading here again!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/19/2014 5:35:00 AM

WOW! You've come full circle, my dear...How very intriguing! :) Loved this. Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:16:00 AM

I can do circles, squares and triangles!!!!! hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/19/2014 2:07:00 AM

Beautiful write Arthur! I hv never liked goodbyes but that too is a way of life!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/26/2014 12:16:00 AM

Sadly yes, thanks for the lovely praise!