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Good Night

Be you, On you alone rely. Rely, Not on man's vow; Your hands. Your hands: Only true friends, Play not. Play not, In your morning; Time flies. Time flies, Hit the targets; Save wins. Save wins, Days are differed; Your night. Your night, Guide jelously; Fear God. Fear God And worship him - Good night.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 11:56:00 PM

:) :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:04:00 PM

Awesome win...PD

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/11/2015 10:46:00 PM

Thank you so much...huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/9/2015 8:37:00 PM

I love how you ended your train, Kayod, and I enjoyed the journey! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/9/2015 12:50:00 AM

It was interesting to see where you decided to take the journey of your poem. Congrats on placing with this creative write, Kayode!

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/6/2015 4:41:00 AM

Hi KAYOD5, That was a very good night. Nice stream of consciousness and message. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl

Paul Callus

Date: 1/5/2015 5:16:00 PM

This is a good train ride Kayode; pity that technically it went slightly off the track, but on the whole I enjoyed it, especially the ending. Pity I missed it before! You still merit hearty congratulations! hugs // paul

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/6/2015 12:50:00 AM

Yes Paul,my bird simply flew with a wing, thanks to the kindness from Richard; It is a learning process ...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/5/2015 4:18:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/6/2015 12:52:00 AM

Thank you Jan for the message...huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/5/2015 3:57:00 PM

Hello Kayode, I think this is a very good poem, unfortunately you are off a bit on the form. I still wanted to honor your creativity with a top 10 finish. Thanks for entering my contest.

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/5/2015 4:03:00 PM

Thank you Richard, it is a learning process. I think with time and more efforts things will be better. Thanks for all the efforts and this honour done me....huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/8/2014 8:23:00 AM

Thanks for riding the train Kayode!

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 12/8/2014 4:52:00 PM

One can not afford to be left out Richard,yours is invogue,immense thanks for the encouragement and leadership...huggs