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Good-Night

To hear the song that’s sung through wind, And pray that it would never end. To feel the suns’ kiss upon my face, A blessing for the human race. Could be a smile or a sigh, That makes all turn toward the sky. A soft murmur from the air, A feel of peace from everywhere. The roar of the ocean, The surge of such motion. The eagles scream, A callers’ love and a lovers’ dream. The sunlight fades and turns to night, All I can say is good-night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 1:19:00 PM
Congrats!! Amazing poem, good luck in finals! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 9/27/2009 1:25:00 PM
Interesting perspective. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Leah. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2009 7:09:00 AM
Wönderful rhymes & imagery. Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you Leah! Adeleke
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:22:00 AM
Leah, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations Leah on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations! Very inspiring and touching. God bless and more power and success in your poetry writing. Ernilando
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Date: 6/21/2009 9:42:00 AM
Hi Leay, I am sorry I am just responding I have not been on the soup for quite some time. I hope that things have been going well for you, and it is always good to hear from you, great write, whimsical, and lighthearted write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 5/6/2009 3:41:00 PM
Bravo! Very touching, and imagery just so alive here. Good job! - jeremiah
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:49:00 PM
work a bit more on this..check the sonnet definition and get the meter count..YOU are a good writter I know you can polish this up from good to excellent! Light & Love
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Date: 5/6/2009 10:52:00 AM
A very lyrical write with superb flow ... an easy music on the ear ... good write, great talent.
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